Corrigé d'anglais

Anglais Evaluation 2 Oral :

Epreuve Type 1 :

So, let me introduce myself. My name’s Floriane Mallinjoud. I was born in one thousand nine hundred ninety six on the first of February in Saone et Loire. I am twenty years old. NON I just turned twenty-one. I live in a house in a small village near Chalon-sur-Saone which is called Baudrières. I’ve been living in Villefranche-sur-Saone for two years. I moved to Baudrières last year. Now, I’m living with my parents for heilth reasons. It’s a year now since I am in cruntchiiis. I don’t have any brother and sister. SI I have got two big half-brothers. I have a dog. Her name is Vendée. She is black and white. My last favourite subject is English because I have big difficulty. There are too many things to learn by heart. I am crazy about shopping of course. I love the téate very much. I love listening to music and reading at home. My favrite book is Le meilleur des mondes of Adoux Huxley. I like swimming, dancing and going to cinema with my friends. I have been dancing for nine years and I have been playing judo and téate for four years. I have already been to Portugal. But I have never been to Paris or English-speaking country. Every summer, I often baby sit on Saturday evenings. I think it was a great experience above all I like earning money. I have chosen these studies because I wanted to specialise in marketing. I did a ten weeks work placement in a Tape à l’oeil at Villefranche-sur-Saone. Contrary to what I expected, I didn't get any pay! My tutor was the responsibeul of store. During my internship, I cawid out many tasks for example welcome and call customers and pick up the phone. I sold and to cash. I had to help the manager. I performed a consumer survey and taken part in a meeting in a firm. My internship developed my knowledge and skills of the professional world. I benefitid from this experience to communicate with people, to be autonomous and to work quickly. I learnt to be responsibol. Professionally, I enjoyed the atmosphere of the contact with consumers. Personally speaking, I enjoyed defend my ideas, face new challenge. Moreover, I made new friends. I really enjoyed this work because it has inaibol me to realize I had made the right choice. I plan on going to university. I’d like to study e-commerce (now, It is necessary in our time). In the future I would like to work for a multinational company. My dream is to visit New York in the United States such as the statue of freedom.

Epreuve Type 2 :

The three documents are related to recalls concerning product defects. The first one announces the latest recalls in the USA, and the second and third documents concern the latest Challenger Motors automobile recall.

The first article was publish by Associatid Press in December two thousand ten. It is a press announcement concerning the latest recalls of four faulty goods because they are dangerous for the life of the consumers. The companies recalled their articles such as houdid jackets for children, Midget Motorcycles, Crispy Chips and cars, for consumer’s protection. The rest of the file focuses on the car manufacturer Challenger’s recalls.

The secondly text was publish by Consumers Business Magazine in January two thousand eleven. It concentrates on recall of four million cars manufactured between two thousand five and two thousand ten of the firm Challenger Motors because of dangerous steering wheels. Wheiras retailer Challenger is now for his commitment towards respect safety standards. However over the past fifteen years, for don’t worship competitors, the company outsources his suppliers. On account of globalisation and in an effort to be trendy and to cutting edge technology, his engéneer are ovewouailm. Moreover, to be efficient, and in the same way reduce labour and manufacturing costs, most of factory of cars Challenger were relocaite abroad. Consequently his cars are lack of quality. The steering wheel blocks while driving and it is believed to have caused several fatal accidents. So to regain consumer confidence and keep up, the firm Challenger Motors will use for example vocational training abroad for increase quality of his cars.

The thirdly article was publish the first April two thousand eleven. It is the home page of a web site presenting the testimony of CEO Benjamin Challenger before a Congressionol committi.  It focus on steering wheel problems of the cars of the company. The CEO epolodgaillze to his customers for technical problems. In fact, he assume full responsibility. The quality and safety of his vehicles are her priority. Actually, Challenger Motors conducting a survey to mainstain the safety of his cars. Even so, the comments of the coverage of Benjamin Challenger’s twitter deals with ranging from confidence in the company to critical and ironical remarks. The first comment focus on sabotage by competitors. The second deals employees overworked. The third points out that the incident should incite people to lobby Congress for better public transport. One must bear in mind that the consumers are health-conscious. This is a reason why Challenger Motors must still prove itself.

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