Essay anglais

THE EXECUTIF

1) The Cabinet is composed of the Prime Minister and other ministers, they are the most important of the governments, they are called the senior ministers; they are appointed by the Prime Minister and are chosen from those elected by the House of Commons but also by the House of Lords.

2) The Prime Minister has different tasks, the main ones are that he is party leader in the country and in the parliament, he must manage the political agenda and can present his program of political actions in political manifestos.

3) The Cabinet has several roles; indeed, it coordinates the policies of the various departments, it decides on the big policy to follow at home abroad and it must develop policies, but the ministers are not stable, they come and go, making hard to planning with consistency of purpose.

4) The Prime Minister liaises with the Monarch, indeed, during a weekly meeting, taking place on Tuesdays, the Prime Minister keeps him informed of what the government is doing, the politics he adopts, the monarch, him, advise him on issues.

5) The shadow cabinet includes members of an opposition party who, under the leadership of the leader of their party, form an alternative cabinet to that of the government, it is a recognized institution; its mission is to scrutinize the budget, monitor and criticize the policy of the minister in place ; their goal is to question the policy of the majority in place in each area of state intervention and prepare an alternative policy.

important: crucial, essential, far-reaching. 

Pour parler d’un exemple, tu peux enrichir “Example” en écrivant “a telling example”, “a case in point”, ou bien même utiliser un verbe (to illustrate, to epitomize)

Dès l’introduction, il te faut présenter la thèse que tu défends, c’est-à-dire ton opinion sur le sujet.

L’essay est un exercice qui demande de prendre position. Ne le fais pas à la fin, tu dois le faire dès le début !

Le développement, en 3 parties, peut se résumer en 4 mots : certes, mais, de plus.

La première partie « certes » est une petite concession que tu vas faire à ta thèse.

 La deuxième partie va présenter un argument fort (plus fort que la petite concession) pour défendre ta thèse.

La dernière partie est un argument supplémentaire qui va défendre ta thèse et te permettre d’enfoncer le clou. La conclusion est classique : il faut reprendre la thèse du début et redire rapidement pourquoi tu l’as défendue.

« As each year sets new records as regards world temperatures, climate change has become a burning issue for our century. Despite international commitments to put the brakes on this phenomenon, I will demonstrate that such global initiatives are unlikely to succeed.

It is true to say that the 2015 COP 21 in Paris was, in a way, a success. At least fifty-five states, responsible for at least fifty-five percent of greenhouse effect emissions eventually agreed on reducing theirs in order to maintain climate change below 2 degrees Celsius. Even the biggest polluters – China and the United States- ratified it, which gives hope regarding the global will to protect our environment.

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