Analyse of the level of education of women in someland

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First of all, the following graphs allow us to compare the highest level of education of women in someland in 1945 and in 1995. We can observe a great evolution in the level of education of women during this 50-year period in Someland.

At the beginning, in 1945 one-third of someland women was not schooling at all, the second third as for him, could only access the third grade.The last third included the few women who managed to access years 6,9 and 12 as well as first degree.

50 years later, the level of education has considerably increase. Indeed, we notice a net decrease in the number of no schooling womem who drop to 0 %. In addition, unlike 1945, half of women reach the level of education of the first degree and 20 % at post geaduate. Also in contrary at 45, 30 % of women were able to follow education until year 9 or 12.

To conclude, we notice that the level of education of women in someland improve considerably for 50 years.

Sample Answer :  
The given pie charts compare the highest education level among women in Someland in 50 years duration. As is observed from the given data, the women made a remarkable progress in education over the 50 year’s period in Someland.

Initially, in 1945, more than one-third women in Someland did not have any schooling experience while another one-third could manage education until third grade only. Less than 1% women in this year managed to get their graduation or post-graduation degree. This reflects the poor education level among the female of Someland in 1945.

After 50 years, the education level among women in Someland remarkably improved and more than 50% women finished their first degree while 20% of them completed their post-graduation. Remaining women either finished their 12th-grade education or studied till 9th grade. No women were left unattended to school and that’s a remarkable progress for women in education in Someland.

In summary, education level among women improved significantly over the 50 years period in Someland.

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