The multifonctional lipstick

the multifunctional lipstick

Our story began in 2017. Paris-based, we became interested in women's needs regarding makeup in 2015. After two years tudying how long it took a woman to put on makeup, how much time she wasted on makeup in the morning , instead of out to see friends or going on a date, we decided ^[a]to create the MB company my boyfriend Benjamin and myself  to help ^[b]women to save time on a day-to-day basis with natural innovate ^[c]devices while being at the forefront of technology.

Our new product is the multifunctional lipstick  that knows exactly what you should wear and which shade would look best on you ! The device connects to an app on iOS and ANDROID via Bluetooth, you choose your outing the make-up that you want to have, natural or coverering  and a shade of lipstick will be proposed to you. The technology will allow the lipstick to take on the shade chosen on the application and it’s done !

Why should you participate ?

Convincing banks ^[d]to finance ( convaincre les banques de supporter notre projet grâce au support collectif de tout le monde ? )  the project through collective support. Then make things happen and become Candids^[e] ( site internet ) ! Say yes to cosmetics that include technology and 100% natural products. This is the best quality we ^[f]can get , there’s no doubt about it. I'm counting on your participation !!

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